The Chorus of Those Out of Rhythm
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Chapter 25

Chapter 25 — The Chorus of Those Out of Rhythm

Updated 22/08/2026 7 min read

The stage light softened into a warm yellow tone as Ms. Nguyet stepped onto the conductor's podium, facing the remaining twenty-two members of the choir standing in neat rows in emerald green ao dai. The auditorium fell silent, thousands of eyes focused on the stage, waiting.

Ms. Nguyet raised her command wand, her hands trembled slightly but her eyes remained steady, scanning every familiar face in front of her - Mr. Tam Loc with a bright smile, Ms. Chin Thoa with proud eyes, Mr. Ba Nghia standing next to Ms. Ca Yen who was sitting in a wheelchair being brought onto the stage in the most solemn position. Thu An stood right next to her, ready, and Mr. Kha sat next to the piano placed in the corner of the stage, his eyes never leaving the woman he loved.

She lowered her command wand. The opening piano sound rang out, slowly and melodiously, and twenty-two voices sang together, blending into an emotional sound that spread throughout the auditorium.

"Urban Memories" resounds, telling about old streets, mossy tiled roofs, and familiar sounds of a time that has faded away with the pace of modern life. The voices of people who have gone through many ups and downs in life, although not technically perfect, carry a genuine emotional weight that no professional choir can fake.

The audience fell silent, many people pulled out handkerchiefs to wipe away their tears as the melody touched on their own personal memories — about grandmothers, mothers, and fathers who have grown old over the years, about familiar places that are gradually disappearing before the city's constant development.

In the middle of the chorus, Ms. Nguyet felt a slight tremor in her hand, but she took a deep breath, focused on the rhythm, on the trusting eyes of Thu An standing next to her, and that tremor gradually subsided, not enough to interrupt the flow of the music.

The song ended in an emotional silence before thunderous applause echoed throughout the auditorium, with many audience members standing up and applauding endlessly. Mrs. Nguyet bowed her head in greeting, her tears rolling down, not hiding it, and the whole choir bowed together, holding each other's hands in bursts of happiness.

After a few minutes to catch our breath, the buffet began — a faster song, requiring intricate coordination between the parts that the group had been practicing for the past two months. The vibrant rhythm, full of vitality, is a complete contrast to the serenity of the first performance, showing another side of the choir - not only people with nostalgia, but also people still full of enthusiasm, still yearning to live and contribute, regardless of age.

In the middle of the song, there was a brief moment when Mr. Tam Loc missed a beat and sang a wrong line, but instead of panicking, he just smiled and quickly caught up with the rhythm, and that small incident, instead of ruining the show, made the audience love the group's authenticity and simplicity even more.

When the last song ended on a resounding high note, the whole stage lit up with endless applause. Many spectators stood up and shouted the name "Binh Minh Choir" with excitement. In the front row, Bao Quoc, Ha Uyen, and Viet Long all stood up and applauded, unable to hide the emotions evident on their faces.

Ms. Nguyet stood in the middle of the stage, her hand holding Thu An's hand tightly on one side and her other hand reaching out to Mr. Kha who was standing up from the piano, all three of them bowed to the audience, and in that moment, under the bright stage lights, amid the endless applause of thousands of people, Ms. Nguyet felt a complete happiness that she had never experienced in her entire life - not because of victory or awards, but because she had completed the journey with her people. most loving, standing firmly on this stage, not alone, but with all those who have accompanied, trusted, and loved her for the past twenty years.

When the group left the stage and retreated backstage, they hugged each other, cried, laughed, mixed in an intense emotion that couldn't be expressed in words. Although the final results of the competition were still to be announced by the judges, they all knew, they had accomplished something greater than any medal — they had proven that neither age, nor illness, nor any physical limitation, could stop the power of love, of friendship, and of never-ending passion.

Bao Quoc, Ha Uyen and Viet Long rushed backstage to congratulate, passing through the crowd of relatives of the members who were also rushing to share the joy. Bao Quoc hugged Ba Nguyet, his voice trembling with emotion. "It was the most beautiful show I've ever seen in my life," he said. "My mother would certainly be very proud if she were alive to witness this moment."

"Your mother is watching us from somewhere, I'm sure," Mrs. Nguyet replied, squeezing his hand.

Ha Uyen hugged Ba Ca Yen, her tears kept falling. "You sing so well, you know? I'm very proud of you."

"Thank you, for everything you've done for us," Mrs. Yen replied, tightly holding the hand of the young girl who had become an indispensable part of the group's journey.

Viet Long stood silently in a corner, recording the final images with his camera, not for the article, but simply to preserve this moment for himself, for what he knew would become one of the most beautiful memories in his journalistic life.

Backstage, the host announced that the judges would need about thirty more minutes to consult and give the final results, before all competing teams were invited back to the stage to hear the announcement. Those thirty minutes passed in a strange state of both nervousness and relief for the entire choir — they had done their best, had given their hearts to every note, and now the result was no longer in their hands.

Ms. Nguyet sat down on a chair in the backstage waiting room. Mr. Kha sat next to her, holding her hand tightly. "Are you tired?" he asked, his eyes full of concern.

"Tired, but happy," Mrs. Nguyet replied, smiling, resting her head on his shoulder. "This is the most meaningful performance in my twenty years as a commander, Mr. Kha. Whether I win the award or not, I am satisfied."

Thu An sat down on the other side and held her mother's hand. "I'm proud of you, Mom, of everyone," she said, her voice choked up. "I think, no matter the outcome, tonight will be one of the nights I will remember forever."

The three sat quietly together, in that moment of waiting, enjoying the rare peace after many months of stress, worry, and even the tears that had fallen on the long journey to get to this moment.

In another corner of the waiting room, Mr. Tam Loc was passionately telling a small group of reporters about the moment he missed a beat on stage, turning that incident into a humorous story that made everyone around laugh. Ms. Chin Thoa stood next to her, occasionally interjecting to add details, her eyes sparkling with the joy of someone who had just experienced the proudest moment in her life.

Ms. Ca Yen, still sitting in a wheelchair, was pushed by Mr. Ba Nghia close to the backstage window, where a corner of the starry night sky could be seen. "I never thought I would one day stand on such a big stage," she said, her voice filled with emotion. "Thank you for always being by my side all these years."

"I'm the one who should thank you," Mr. Ba Nghia replied, his voice also trembling. "Thanks to her, thanks to her singing coming from the window in the past, I found a reason to continue living happily after my wife passed away."

The two old people looked at each other in the dim backstage lights, a silent understanding that had been cultivated over many years of companionship, no words needed to be said for both to feel the warmth of friendship, and perhaps, something more than friendship, quietly blooming between two souls who had gone through many ups and downs of life.

The loudspeaker announced the announcement, inviting all teams to return to the stage to hear the results announced. The whole choir stood up, held hands, walked out of the backstage, and walked towards the spotlight again, this time not to perform, but to receive the results of all the efforts they had put in during the past two difficult but also meaningful months.

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